Futtah
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Just chillin' around
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Post by Futtah on Dec 22, 2001 16:06:34 GMT -5
now choose wanna stay with a simple excuse that im a sick sick bastard with a blown fuse let me leak some news, try to peak some clues and get used to loose to the gay tom cruise
my vocabulary works like finding the primary word using a secondary rhyme and oh? what is the third? i don't just go around and keep flipping the bird to people i don't know that's kinda absurd
but it's heard to look after your backpocket enough of your whine for now just cluck it pull your shotgun out and start to cock it shoot that bastard oh damn? did i pickpock it?
ill kill you, im storming your shitty block kid you better close the door with a rock, lock it! cause i have clocked the bomb better talk shit shooting with my automatic no shit just duck it
leaving Wallstreet the police be stopping me the officers asking me whats wrong with the economy? handcuffing me while i'm spotting a chance to flee dropped the mic made a move, and my hands were free
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Post by Tha Soldiah on Dec 22, 2001 18:05:20 GMT -5
nice nice, im feeling that shit.
juss too much of that "i gotta gun and ima kill you" shit, im not likin to much of that
peace
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Futtah
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Post by Futtah on Dec 23, 2001 4:10:41 GMT -5
yeah fair enough, i don't write alot within that style.. tried it out well, more shit upcoming..
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Post by Tha Soldiah on Dec 23, 2001 12:17:17 GMT -5
cool cool.. yo, where ya from? i saw you was from CPH so i juss wondered where?
peace
Tha Soldiah
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Futtah
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Post by Futtah on Dec 23, 2001 14:00:45 GMT -5
yeah CPH 4life.. i live at Østerbro if ya know tha place it's just the place to be chill
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Post by Tha Soldiah on Dec 23, 2001 15:34:15 GMT -5
word word, offcause i know Østerbro lol
peace
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Futtah
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Post by Futtah on Dec 24, 2001 5:38:22 GMT -5
where ya from dawg?
chill
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Post by Tha Soldiah on Dec 24, 2001 6:20:39 GMT -5
a lil town called Nærum like 10 km from Lyngby.. juss a small crappy town really lol
peace
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YinYang
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Why are u even lookin at my personal text??
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Post by YinYang on Dec 24, 2001 20:16:51 GMT -5
when I looked at the ammount of replies and saw 7 , I taught there was gonna be lots of ppl giving feedback, turn out to be only Soldiah ..
Anywayz, this was real nice , flow was nice , vocab was good.. I really like the first verse, but the third verse was pretty wack , mainly cuz all the rhymes were just 'it' ...
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Post by Tha Soldiah on Dec 25, 2001 8:55:03 GMT -5
well Andrew, it aint juss "It" he rhymed lol, its POCKet, CLUCK it, COCK it and pick POCK it.. some pretty good multis actually but it's heard to look after your backpocket enough of your whine for now just cluck it pull your shotgun out and start to cock it shoot that bastard oh damn? did i pickpock it? peace
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YinYang
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Why are u even lookin at my personal text??
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Post by YinYang on Dec 25, 2001 22:24:22 GMT -5
well Andrew, it aint juss "It" he rhymed lol, its POCKet, CLUCK it, COCK it and pick POCK it.. some pretty good multis actually peace oh ,now that u said it, it was actually pretty good... I just dont seem to be able to notice some stuff ......
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