Phrantic
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Post by Phrantic on Dec 22, 2001 18:30:09 GMT -5
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Post by nazzle on Dec 22, 2001 18:36:51 GMT -5
hey yo
i thought ur voice was much improved on this song....a little hard to understand still but better...your flo was good too...and a nice beat......keep spittin..peace....
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Phrantic
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Post by Phrantic on Dec 22, 2001 18:51:12 GMT -5
 thats good to hear karen  yeah ill keep spittin... and actually i wanted to use this beat for a song called 'negative view' but i couldnt come up with more to write than only this verse so i used verse + beat as an intro ;D
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Post by T1 Req on Dec 23, 2001 9:28:10 GMT -5
The verse was OK, but you need to improve your flow plenty...you sound like you're not far off talking in rhymes so it fits a beat. The content was fine for an intro(try staying away from the whole "I'm wack" angle though)
Where are you from though? Your voice sounded real...not weird but like no accent I've heard lol
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Phrantic
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Post by Phrantic on Dec 23, 2001 13:11:35 GMT -5
im from the netherlands ;D
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Futtah
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Post by Futtah on Dec 24, 2001 5:36:12 GMT -5
overall your intro is fine.. but it sounds like you put to many rhymes in it and that you're starting to swallow them.. if you know what i mean chill |
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Phrantic
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Post by Phrantic on Dec 24, 2001 10:58:30 GMT -5
could be... i hear that some more and ithink itsquite true ;D
dunno why..
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thats good to hear karen 
