2 New wack tracks

[YinYang]

k, I'm in the middle of uploading both tracks into my Yahoo Briefcase , so it could be up or maybe not by time u read this..

Link is : http://http://asia.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/wochoo/lst?&.dir=/My+Documents/AUDIOS&.src=bc&.view=l&.last=1

I know it aint perfect, and it aint that clear, but at least one of the tracks flowed well (SIMPLISTIK) and the other track was a lyrical disply but did not flow well (BEEF WITH ME)..

Gimme feedback on it, k??

[YinYang]

k, heres the lyrix for the track that y'all should download first ..

SIMPLISTIK

(Verse 1)
Check it out, this is da flow of da century//
Aint no stoppin me, step over Jay Z //
Step over Izzo, y'all  are just minnows//
AInt nobody gonna be dissin ma flows //
My tracks are precious , just like gold//
While the rest of y'all, are just so - so//
Rap brawls ??  wish ya never met me be4 //
CUz fo sure, its  gonna be ur downfall//
Got no return,  not mentioned at all //
Ya just got burned , rap star, no more //
Ya claim ya hardcore, wat ??
Have a rap war ,  ur eyes get sore //

(Chorus)
Why do ppl think, that since I'm 13 //
Aint fit to be in this rap scene //
Is it cuz I aint old enuff //
To talk bout gals, life , cash and drugs//
Maybe its cuz MC'z fear that their future is in doubt//
Cover up their fear , by  stating how much I aint cut out to be in this crowd//



(Verse 2)
I might be underground, never get found //
Atleast I'll have some pleasure bringin y'all down //
Hold on a minute, where is my crown //
I'm still a kid and I match y'all pound for pound //
This is funnier than a clown //
I'm 13, and I make the wack MC's all leave town //
their hearts hurtin ,cuz the gals leave them alone //
embarresed , by their skills on the microphone //
So battling me is like lookin  at the mirror //
You get to see  all of your errors  //
SO many errors that the glas just shatters //

(Chorus)
Why do ppl think, that since I'm 13 //
Aint fit to be in this rap scene //
Is it cuz I aint old enuff //
To talk bout gals, life , cash and drugs//
Maybe its cuz MC'z fear that their future is in doubt//
Cover up their fear , by  stating how much I aint cut out to be in this crowd//

(Verse 3)
Dont agree with wat I've state ??//
You're wack, while I'm feared more than the antrax //
Thats a fact son, nuff said //
Apologising ??  , well thats too late //
Pretend u cryin ?? Thats just fake //
Ya said dat , me ---> u hate //
I did warn u, it'll be a mistake //
Now I'm numba 1 , y'all below my legs //
Whoops, we aint in da same league //
Ya filled with wackness while I'm destined for greatness //
Its too late for changes, how sad life is //

(Chorus)
Why do ppl think, that since I'm 13 //
Aint fit to be in this rap scene //
Is it cuz I aint old enuff //
To talk bout gals, life , cash and drugs//
Maybe its cuz MC'z fear that their future is in doubt//
Cover up their fear , by  stating how much I aint cut out to be in this crowd//

[YinYang]

and heres the lyrix for the other track,  

BEEF WITH ME ??
(VERSE 1)
Blazing u down, y'all gonna get YangPhobia//
Yin Yang y'all gonna fear, deadly as cancer//
Wack rappers be carefull, ya could be the next I murder//
Gonna reach amazing heights, just like Vince Carter//
Gonna go after MC'z that think they iller //
I'mma come out harder, then makle y'all retire //
Did ur parents not told ya, dont ever play with fire//
Cuz u gonna get burned, but kids never learn //
THis rap game to me is all entertainment //
Dont care bout payments, satisfaction thru my sentence//
I take on ur  damn crew without reinforcements //
Display my dominace  thru my arrogance //
Y'all wack MC's are just like fashion //
One moment  u're the in thing, the next moment, u aint no1's concern //

(Chorus )
Beef with me, why?? When all u gonna get is mad cow desease//
Battle me, why ?? When all u gonna get is embarrasing moments//
Challenge me, why?? When u know I'm king at ripping MC's//
BAttle me, why ?? WHen u know it'll be ur funeral, so dont//


(VERSE 2)
Unlike fashion, I'm equivelant to CLinton //
ThoI've received ma  pensioned , I'll forever be a legend //
Cuz I've ripped so many MC's till I cant count em ' //
So many till ur MATH teacher cant solve this problem//
So many till ur mother taught I was satan  //
THeres a certain pattern, those I battled faced extinction//
But there are still those who think they wont get toast//
They boast bout  their ill vocab and addictive flows//
Turn them into no shows, freaked out like they had seen a ghost//

(Chorus )
Beef with me, why?? When all u gonna get is mad cow desease//
Battle me, why ?? When all u gonna get is embarrasing moments//
Challenge me, why?? When u know I'm king at ripping MC's//
BAttle me, why ?? WHen u know it'll be ur funeral, so dont//

(Verse 3)
Wat are rap battles ??  Izzit where I send y'all to the hospital ??//
Make y'all back peddal , be4 I affect ur mental//
Be4 I make u cry like a baby who lost his rattle//
Be4 I get u fried like I was a sentinal //
Battlle rap ?? I'll make u regret //
I'll leave u dead,  its easiear done then said //
Talk bout beating me , instead its the opposite/
You're messed up, just like Aguilera in  Marmalade//
U just suck , so dont battle me, cuz I'mma rip u hard //

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TO clear a line up
VINCE CARTER = A basketball player who can jump extremly high...

BTW, y'all might have notice that each verse from each track has a different kinda voice..I was experimenting with it , to see which can give me the clearest result..So, y'all just tell me which verse is the clearest, ..THX  lot guyz..

Damn, after listening to BEEF WITH ME again ,I found out that I have a weird accent in it so u might not be able to hear to shit... So, its up 2 u to download this..

[econamikz]

link dont work

[YinYang]

WHOOPZ !! My bad..

heres the link asia.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/wochoo/lst?.dir=/My+Documents/AUDIOS&.order=&.view=l&.src=bc&.done=http%3a//asia.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/wochoo/lst%3f.dir=/My%2bDocuments/AUDIOS%26.src=bc%26.view=l

and since I'm too lazy to change the title, 44 (SIMPLISTIK ) and 00044 ( BEEF WITH ME)

[nazzle]

i downloaded the first one simplistik i think it was.......sorry man i really aint feelin your accent...i mean the flo was aight its just the flo/accent.....sorry

peace.....

[Phrantic]

link dont work. and i dont feel like listening to asian emcees either. plus im downloadin nesties audio featuring will as well... so that takes time enough with that shitty yahoo briefcase... just get mp3.com or soundclick accounts yall

[nazzle]

i have

my soundclick works but not for anyone else

and mp3.com take too long to approve i wanted to put that up now



peace..

[Phrantic]

then post up real audio's ;D

[nazzle]

HAHAHA your joking right........


anyway sorry for spamming your thread yin..........

[YinYang]

;D   I was listening to the first thing again, and then I realised that in all of ma tracks , I have this weird Asian accent, eh ??

Damn, it took quite some time for me to realise dat..
Anywayz, at least I've found an Asian rap board, so I could rap in  a couple of languages .....

Thx for the feedback anywayz ...

[Rubber Duck]

[glow=blue,2,300]I Like dis shit,it wuz tight,u shouldnt say u wack cuz ur not mayne,stay wit it.[/glow]

[MazziveTerror]

Umm...aight..i was peepin the "Rap Music Collab 1" i think....

First of all....GET A BEAT MAN!

Second....you need to work on your pronounciation (or however you spell it) cuz it's madd hard for me to understand what you sayin..(you didn't post lyrics to this track)

yeah well....Word on your pronounciation, and get a beat. Thats all i can say right now. Quality seems to be aight.

and if you dunno how to add a beat then put a question up in the other forum "Audio help" or whatever it's called, and i'ma try and help you out, if noone else comes before me, lol.

This wasn't good....sorry. (plus..i hate listenin to acapellas)

Peace

Keep Spittin.

Mazz

[YinYang]

oh damn ,  I took down these two tracks a couple of days back..
and this rap music collabo was an accapella which was sent in to some other Asian producer..

if u wanna listen to Simplistik (which has a beat ) go 2
artists.mp3s.com/artists/250/andrewc.html and download it..

do not download the beat I MADE , its just a waste of time !!